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An Inspector Calls page 1

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Lol yush, I am now doing a comic TOO 8DDDDD!!! Add to my ever growing list :'D!!

So yeah, Dazza mentioned this play to me ages ago and I found out the school had some copies so i've borrowed one for a while. I loved the play 'An Inspector Calls' so much I decided to make an anthro comic out of it with mah buddeh's fursonas ^^ Here they are in a shiny list ^^

Arthur Birling ~ Carmen ~ :icondangerdragon:
Eric Birling ~ Mat ~ :icondragon-v0942:
Edna ~ Leayah (with tribbs on shoulder) ~ :iconblankwood: & :icontribble-of-doom:
Gerald Croft ~ Swiftwish ~ :iconsimbaxnala:
Sheila Birling ~ Loudeyes ~ :iconfluffylovey:
Sybil Birling ~ Yuka ~ :iconcolacat24:

I DON'T OWN THE STORY!

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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

LeRawr :3

Okay I'll start with the overall impression.
The first feel I get from this picture is warmth and a certain fineness. The colors are well coordinated and have a very good feel. Well done on that <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="15" height="15" alt=":aww:" title="Aww" />

Next, when I looked at it more closely I was troubled by the lack of background details. It somewhat clashes with the relatively precise characters. I know it's hard work but... comics are MADE to be hard work XDXD

The characters fit in quite well with the general feel of the surroundings. The shading is simple yet effective with the whole mood of the scene (even though there probably shouldn't be any non-shaded places on the parts of the characters that are under the table XD) and their expressions fit with what they are saying.

After that there are little things, like how the port bottle seems to be melting into the table ^^' and some anatomy troubles... But all in all I really like it.
Lookin' forward to seeing more. Good luck with it Izzy <3